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]]> By: S. W. Vaughn http://www.staciakane.net/2006/05/29/shut-up/#comment-201 S. W. Vaughn Thu, 01 Jun 2006 13:01:00 +0000 http://www.staciakane.net/2006/05/29/shut-up/#comment-201 It's all yours, December. :-) It’s all yours, December. :-)

]]> By: December Quinn http://www.staciakane.net/2006/05/29/shut-up/#comment-198 December Quinn Wed, 31 May 2006 19:35:00 +0000 http://www.staciakane.net/2006/05/29/shut-up/#comment-198 Oh, no, Sam, I don't think all dialogue is bad. It's just trying to find a balance isn't always easy, especially with some characters. I've had a couple who were really verbal, but not everyone is. Oh, no, Sam, I don’t think all dialogue is bad. It’s just trying to find a balance isn’t always easy, especially with some characters. I’ve had a couple who were really verbal, but not everyone is.

]]> By: Sam http://www.staciakane.net/2006/05/29/shut-up/#comment-197 Sam Wed, 31 May 2006 17:37:00 +0000 http://www.staciakane.net/2006/05/29/shut-up/#comment-197 Oh, I don't know. Sometimes they can say the sexiest things, lol. It doesn't have to sound corny. I think the sexiest thing a heroine can say, for example, is "Don't move." (when I read that coming from the hero I usually crack up...) And he can say things like, "So do you like that? What about this?" Sort of leading the reader on to the action before it's even described - you see?<br/>LOL Oh, I don’t know. Sometimes they can say the sexiest things, lol. It doesn’t have to sound corny. I think the sexiest thing a heroine can say, for example, is “Don’t move.” (when I read that coming from the hero I usually crack up…) And he can say things like, “So do you like that? What about this?” Sort of leading the reader on to the action before it’s even described – you see?
LOL

]]> By: December Quinn http://www.staciakane.net/2006/05/29/shut-up/#comment-196 December Quinn Wed, 31 May 2006 17:33:00 +0000 http://www.staciakane.net/2006/05/29/shut-up/#comment-196 Actually, Fringes, I think most of us agree with you, but I've seen far too many comments from editors/readers/critics that complain about lack of dialogue in sex scenes. I keep mine to a minumum, generally, and try to have at least one in each book where they don't talk, but I do put some in there just because sometimes it feels like they should say something. Actually, Fringes, I think most of us agree with you, but I’ve seen far too many comments from editors/readers/critics that complain about lack of dialogue in sex scenes. I keep mine to a minumum, generally, and try to have at least one in each book where they don’t talk, but I do put some in there just because sometimes it feels like they should say something.

]]> By: fringes http://www.staciakane.net/2006/05/29/shut-up/#comment-195 fringes Wed, 31 May 2006 17:19:00 +0000 http://www.staciakane.net/2006/05/29/shut-up/#comment-195 Layman's suggestion: skip the dialogue entirely and let the (awesome, beautifully written) narrative do all the work. The reader can mentally inject his/her own dialogue if needed.<br/><br/>Dialogue, to me, is an expository tool, and your readers may not need anything explained during a sex scene unless a character is revealing something shocking while being flipped over.<br/><br/>Just a thought. Professionals, take over from here. Layman’s suggestion: skip the dialogue entirely and let the (awesome, beautifully written) narrative do all the work. The reader can mentally inject his/her own dialogue if needed.

Dialogue, to me, is an expository tool, and your readers may not need anything explained during a sex scene unless a character is revealing something shocking while being flipped over.

Just a thought. Professionals, take over from here.

]]> By: December Quinn http://www.staciakane.net/2006/05/29/shut-up/#comment-194 December Quinn Wed, 31 May 2006 16:28:00 +0000 http://www.staciakane.net/2006/05/29/shut-up/#comment-194 Haha, JTC! How about, "I love it when you call me big Daddy"...<br/><br/>Woo-hoo, Bernita! Actually, I've used that line before. It's fine, IMO, as long as he doesn;t agree and she doesn;t say it again. Then it turns into another "You're so sweet and pretty" conversation. Like Jenna says, it turns into porn talk if not handled right (which isn't to say your "You're so big" goes anywhere near pron talk to me, because it doesn't at all.)<br/><br/>Actually, SW..."Shut up and fuck" is pretty damn hot. Mind if I use it? <br/><br/>(How appropos...my word verif is "wionng") Haha, JTC! How about, “I love it when you call me big Daddy”…

Woo-hoo, Bernita! Actually, I’ve used that line before. It’s fine, IMO, as long as he doesn;t agree and she doesn;t say it again. Then it turns into another “You’re so sweet and pretty” conversation. Like Jenna says, it turns into porn talk if not handled right (which isn’t to say your “You’re so big” goes anywhere near pron talk to me, because it doesn’t at all.)

Actually, SW…”Shut up and fuck” is pretty damn hot. Mind if I use it?

(How appropos…my word verif is “wionng”)

]]> By: Anonymous http://www.staciakane.net/2006/05/29/shut-up/#comment-193 Anonymous Wed, 31 May 2006 16:05:00 +0000 http://www.staciakane.net/2006/05/29/shut-up/#comment-193 "Say my name." -JTC ;~) “Say my name.” -JTC ;~)

]]> By: Jenna Howard http://www.staciakane.net/2006/05/29/shut-up/#comment-192 Jenna Howard Tue, 30 May 2006 17:38:00 +0000 http://www.staciakane.net/2006/05/29/shut-up/#comment-192 I'm not big on chit chat in the sex scenes either. Kinda detracts from the mood.<br/><br/>I gotta say nothing jars me like ready a really sexy sex scene and all of a sudden the heroine says "I love your c**k. Put it in me." etc. Uhm. Yeah. Cue porn music. Sigh.<br/><br/>S.W.'s dialogue made me laugh. I’m not big on chit chat in the sex scenes either. Kinda detracts from the mood.

I gotta say nothing jars me like ready a really sexy sex scene and all of a sudden the heroine says “I love your c**k. Put it in me.” etc. Uhm. Yeah. Cue porn music. Sigh.

S.W.’s dialogue made me laugh.

]]> By: S. W. Vaughn http://www.staciakane.net/2006/05/29/shut-up/#comment-191 S. W. Vaughn Tue, 30 May 2006 15:20:00 +0000 http://www.staciakane.net/2006/05/29/shut-up/#comment-191 What kind of things sound sexy to me?<br/><br/>"Shut up and f**k."<br/><br/>Yeah. Dialogue stinks in sex scenes. I hate reading it and I hate writing it. With you all the way, girl. :-) What kind of things sound sexy to me?

“Shut up and f**k.”

Yeah. Dialogue stinks in sex scenes. I hate reading it and I hate writing it. With you all the way, girl. :-)

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