Unholy Ghosts
New Words: 9k or so, throughout the week
Total wordcount: 59,008
The Good: Woo-HOOO! Big makeout scene! A sex scene (they made me do it, knew I wouldn’t be able to resist)
The Bad: Oh, dear. We’ve totally hurt someone we care about. Also, bad guys hitting people and killing people.
The Gross: Dead person left in Chess’ bed.
The rampant drug use: a banned pill found in a tunnel full of dead people.
Location: Bar, rainy streets, Lex’s place, Chess’ place
Downspeech: “You ain’t count on no rules to save you, Chess. You oughta know that. Don’t know where your head was.”
I Hate My Work: You’re never going to get all this tied up, you’ve written yourself into a corner, you suck.











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Oh, you are making me look like a SLUG!!
LOL!
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“Dead person left in Chess’ bed”
Would that by any chance be related to the sex scene? o_O
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I’m just trying to finish it already, Sam, lol!
Oh, Kerry, that’s…ah…kind of sick.
No, the sex scene happens at someone else’s place, then she comes home and finds the body.