Comments on: Be a sex-writing strumpet Pt 7 http://www.staciakane.net/2008/07/25/be-a-sex-writing-strumpet-pt-7/ Author of Urban Fantasy Fri, 10 Feb 2012 11:56:28 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: Jennifer http://www.staciakane.net/2008/07/25/be-a-sex-writing-strumpet-pt-7/#comment-5542 Jennifer Mon, 28 Jul 2008 09:50:00 +0000 http://www.staciakane.net/2008/07/25/be-a-sex-writing-strumpet-pt-7/#comment-5542 Ohhh - good advice!! I can hear my editor talking, lol.<br/>Sam Ohhh – good advice!! I can hear my editor talking, lol.
Sam

]]> By: laughingwolf http://www.staciakane.net/2008/07/25/be-a-sex-writing-strumpet-pt-7/#comment-5540 laughingwolf Fri, 25 Jul 2008 18:42:00 +0000 http://www.staciakane.net/2008/07/25/be-a-sex-writing-strumpet-pt-7/#comment-5540 totally excited by both scenes, if in different ways... thx dee, will be using your advice totally excited by both scenes, if in different ways… thx dee, will be using your advice

]]> By: Seeley deBorn http://www.staciakane.net/2008/07/25/be-a-sex-writing-strumpet-pt-7/#comment-5539 Seeley deBorn Fri, 25 Jul 2008 17:24:00 +0000 http://www.staciakane.net/2008/07/25/be-a-sex-writing-strumpet-pt-7/#comment-5539 Why is it you always post about exactly what I'm working on? <br/><br/>I've been editing one piece to deal with repetitive sentence structure. And using structure to create mood in another. <br/><br/>Yesterday, as I was writing the scene where the hero sees the heroine for the first time in the story, I was thinking about upping the verbage to match the later erotic scenes. Why is it you always post about exactly what I’m working on?

I’ve been editing one piece to deal with repetitive sentence structure. And using structure to create mood in another.

Yesterday, as I was writing the scene where the hero sees the heroine for the first time in the story, I was thinking about upping the verbage to match the later erotic scenes.

]]> By: Charles Gramlich http://www.staciakane.net/2008/07/25/be-a-sex-writing-strumpet-pt-7/#comment-5538 Charles Gramlich Fri, 25 Jul 2008 16:57:00 +0000 http://www.staciakane.net/2008/07/25/be-a-sex-writing-strumpet-pt-7/#comment-5538 I see the point about the two different scenes. It's also a mood thing as to how I'd like to see a sex scene written. I see the point about the two different scenes. It’s also a mood thing as to how I’d like to see a sex scene written.

]]> By: December/Stacia http://www.staciakane.net/2008/07/25/be-a-sex-writing-strumpet-pt-7/#comment-5537 December/Stacia Fri, 25 Jul 2008 14:59:00 +0000 http://www.staciakane.net/2008/07/25/be-a-sex-writing-strumpet-pt-7/#comment-5537 Lol, Bernard! I do the same thing, only with "softly". :-) Lol, Bernard! I do the same thing, only with “softly”. :-)

]]> By: BernardL http://www.staciakane.net/2008/07/25/be-a-sex-writing-strumpet-pt-7/#comment-5536 BernardL Fri, 25 Jul 2008 13:14:00 +0000 http://www.staciakane.net/2008/07/25/be-a-sex-writing-strumpet-pt-7/#comment-5536 The comparison worked very well. 'Gently' is the one I have to really watch out for. When I read over a scene I've written, I find so many 'gentlys' I want to gently gag. :) The comparison worked very well. ‘Gently’ is the one I have to really watch out for. When I read over a scene I’ve written, I find so many ‘gentlys’ I want to gently gag. :)

]]> By: December/Stacia http://www.staciakane.net/2008/07/25/be-a-sex-writing-strumpet-pt-7/#comment-5534 December/Stacia Fri, 25 Jul 2008 12:24:00 +0000 http://www.staciakane.net/2008/07/25/be-a-sex-writing-strumpet-pt-7/#comment-5534 Thanks Bernita! I was a little worried they wouldn't work. Thanks Bernita! I was a little worried they wouldn’t work.

]]> By: Bernita http://www.staciakane.net/2008/07/25/be-a-sex-writing-strumpet-pt-7/#comment-5533 Bernita Fri, 25 Jul 2008 12:01:00 +0000 http://www.staciakane.net/2008/07/25/be-a-sex-writing-strumpet-pt-7/#comment-5533 A very good comparison to make your poinrt, December! A very good comparison to make your poinrt, December!

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