Comments on: Be a sex-writing strumpet Pt 18

By: Marian

Marian — Fri, 22 Aug 2008 12:20:00 +0000

Agreed, I like the dialogue. And I had to take my cardigan off when I was reading the sex scene.

By: Bernita

Bernita — Fri, 22 Aug 2008 11:22:00 +0000

“and later she tells him her mother warned her about men like him and he says, “Let’s go back to my place. I’ll show you why she was right.” “
~snickers~
Great line.

By: laughingwolf

laughingwolf — Thu, 21 Aug 2008 21:54:00 +0000

mhmm dee, i can go for that scenario, as a bit of a change lol

By: December/Stacia

December/Stacia — Thu, 21 Aug 2008 13:25:00 +0000

Well, hey, Laughingwolf, you know my feelings on that. I’m good with talk during forplay but it’s not necessary, and I don’t like talky sex at all. You can always have someone just shush the other, and make it them watching each other’s reactions, communicating by touch, that sort of thing.

Lol kis! Exactly.

Yep, Charles, it absolutely is! Although I do think that can go on too long as well and people start to lose interest. Personally I think 4 or 5 books is as long as you can stretch that out before people start to get fed up. But you’re absolutely right, it is foreplay.

Thank you Bernard! You know “classy” is one of my most important goals, so that makes me feel great. And, sigh, I hope your wife knows how lucky she is.

By: BernardL

BernardL — Wed, 20 Aug 2008 20:39:00 +0000

I remember reading that passage in ‘Blood Will Tell’ and thinking what a classy scene it was. Giving oral gratification is one of man’s most enjoyable experiences, if he’s not a self indulgent jerk as you say. There are very few more reliable ways to evoke screams of satisfaction. Leaving such parts out of an erotic romance would render it incomplete.

By: Charles Gramlich

Charles Gramlich — Wed, 20 Aug 2008 19:14:00 +0000

I’m reminded of certain TV shows where they create sexual tension between two characters, like Niles and Daphne, but hold off and off and off on letting them really get anywhere. That’s a kind of foreplay too, though not as erotic.

By: kirsten saell

kirsten saell — Wed, 20 Aug 2008 18:39:00 +0000

Logistically it makes more sense, and emotionally it makes more sense;

Plus, it means more fun for me, hahah!

By: laughingwolf

laughingwolf — Wed, 20 Aug 2008 16:12:00 +0000

another great addition, dee

while i can now do the descriptive part, having learned from your post, i really have to imagine some erotic dialog for the ‘during’, not a strong suit for me….